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you broke me

you broke me

A Poem by Chloe

something inside of me i had to get out


Im over it

The fake feelings

The fake I love yous

Everything I avoided myself from

Until I met you


You claim to love me

And yet abandon me every time your voice stops ringing in my ears

How dare you

How could you


All I wanted this whole time was to be fixed

And that’s what you did

You sewed up my stitching

And taped my holes shut


But as soon as you did I was reconstructed in glass


And you knocked me off the shelf


I was doing fine as deteriorated fabrics

With holes and missing buttons

And I allowed you to reconstruct me with glass

And now I don’t think I’ll ever be solid again


I thought I was broken before

I mistook my insecurities for black holes

When this whole time they were nothing but stains

But now I am the black hole

The super nova of darkness

Collapsing in on myself


You broke me.

And the permanent damage to my heart cannot be replaced 

© 2016 Chloe

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Yes, lost love does do that to people often. Nice perspective used here.

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Added on October 12, 2016
Last Updated on October 12, 2016
Tags: broken heart, sad, relationship, break up, love, loss, depression



Venice Beach, CA

18 and simply coping more..