Green is with Black

Green is with Black

A Poem by irenic
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Green is describing the goodness and black is reflecting the negativity. I try my best to convey that every person has a soul made of flower and the thorn of it too.

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Lets go and find sapiens in green cloaks
I said to myself going at cache
Sapiens in green cloaks i have found in disclosing workshop
Wearing black cloaks on this land
Green cloaks are being wore by everyone
But the verdure of cloak express
When takes place in life by ship of melancholiness
Green cloaks are being with black cloaks
By everyone in this ecosystem
To attempt bluff in fray
Green is with black in ecosystem's tray
Which is the purest green is immutable in this bay


© 2015 irenic



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a great write...yes more people need to swap their black coats for green!!


Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

thank you ........................................:)
I agree dear Poet. We are a bit of all things. I liked how you made the statement understandable. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
irenic

2 Years Ago

:)................................................
Nice write... the world would be a better place if there were no black cloaks :) Good work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciation :)
"Wearing black cloaks on this land
Green cloaks are being wore by everyone
But the verdure of cloak express"

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:).....................
Nice write irenic, your message is subtle and the language is straight forward, it is a great way to write and I really liked this one, cheers! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
We need to find goodness in people in general and have a good workshop on personalities. A powerful write. ...:)....

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...........
The most positive person can be negative at times - I believe it is human nature. Your poem is well written and a pleasure to read.

:) Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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Added on January 13, 2015
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Tags: green, cloaks, black

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irenic
irenic

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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