Light in the Bin

Light in the Bin

A Poem by irenic
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It is a poem I have written in the memory of the poet of East, Allama Iqbal.

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Felt an odour of verdure in incardine
Bring the lost education from ink lacking pen
Found the ray of sunlight in bin

Liked the colour of green in mandala
Touched the colour of white in dawn
Under quarantine from dupatta

Fused the two pigments under the ban
With shining brush in ganglion
And painted "Pakistan".

Happy Iqbal Day

© 2015 irenic



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Beautiful. This was a very "colorful" poem with a smooth flow and elegant vocabulary. I really enjoyed reading it. Nice work.

-William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


irenic

1 Year Ago

Thank you sooooo much for such a nice and appreciating review.
I like it so much. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


irenic

1 Year Ago

Welcome! And thank you for giving review! :)
A fitting write for a great Pakistani and world poet. He is very talented and brings pride to his nation... Excellent. .....:).....

Posted 1 Year Ago


irenic

1 Year Ago

Thank you for such a lovely review and appreciating our national poet. once again thank you........... read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome muchly. ....:))))....
irenic

1 Year Ago

:)..................................................:)
Awesome write... awesome tribute piece :) It's been so long since I've seen you on here... I'm happy to see you and read your writing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


irenic

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciation ☺
Amazing poem dear Poet. I like the style and the meaning shared. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Always good to honor the poets unknown to others.
Coyote


Posted 1 Year Ago


irenic

1 Year Ago

Thank you for warm appreciation ☺
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

My pleasure and you are welcome.
irenic

1 Year Ago

...........................................:)

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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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Hi! Aslam O Alikum, I am Irenic, student of grade 9. My favourite hobbies are watching television, using PC, chewing food, creative writing and much more. I like to it Pakistani food especially Khows.. more..

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