Perfection Defined

Perfection Defined

A Poem by Bryan Irion

I just love the way you are, my love.


I have seen a lot of smiles,
I have heard a lot of loud laughs,
I stared beautiful faces.
and have witnessed graceful gestures,
but never encountered like yours.

I saw your smile through my negative vision
and heard you laugh from a million light years away.
I focused into the face created by you
however, still love, every chapter of you.
and witness different aspects of how you move,

Your moves is the most beautiful dance,
your voice is the best of all songs,
Shinning star, it is, your eyes
your laugh is the craziest poem.
and love to see your lovely face.

It is perfection that defines you for me,
like the reality of my fantasy.
just smile while you're with me, and let me see
As we witness the sunset beside the sea
cause I love it, I love you, and I'll always do.

© 2016 Bryan Irion

Author's Note

Bryan Irion
ignore grammar problems

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Your love gives me an impression that it is pure and sweet hope that the one you described appreciate it like we appreciate your works... It felt so good to be in love with your poems.
Please keep writing.
gonna wait for your updates and your poems that tells about your life story.

Posted 7 Months Ago

Amazing. Not only well written, but your poem conveys the most unconditional, purest of love. Bravo.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Bryan Irion

2 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating this work
Love is the greatest thing on earth. It can inspire the poets, and make the ordinary person feel like a king or queen! Even when love fails, we look for it again. An expressive write.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Bryan Irion

2 Years Ago

thank you very much sir
Beautiful poetry , Bryan.
Loved the way you praise the one you love using metaphors;

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bryan Irion

2 Years Ago

O thank you for your appreciation ma'am.

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Added on October 13, 2016
Last Updated on October 13, 2016


Bryan Irion
Bryan Irion

NCR, Philippines

Born to love not to be love. I lost in the fantacies of love, realities over imagination. Writing poetry is my passion, through this I can say and express everything I want to my love, issues, and to .. more..