Perfection Defined

I just love the way you are, my love.

I have seen a lot of smiles,

I have heard a lot of loud laughs,

I stared beautiful faces.

and have witnessed graceful gestures,

but never encountered like yours.

I saw your smile through my negative vision

and heard you laugh from a million light years away.

I focused into the face created by you

however, still love, every chapter of you.

and witness different aspects of how you move,

Your moves is the most beautiful dance,

your voice is the best of all songs,

Shinning star, it is, your eyes

your laugh is the craziest poem.

and love to see your lovely face.

It is perfection that defines you for me,

like the reality of my fantasy.

just smile while you're with me, and let me see

As we witness the sunset beside the sea

cause I love it, I love you, and I'll always do.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Delilah]

Your love gives me an impression that it is pure and sweet hope that the one you described appreciate it like we appreciate your works... It felt so good to be in love with your poems.
Please keep writing.
gonna wait for your updates and your poems that tells about your life story.

[WriterGirl247247]

Amazing. Not only well written, but your poem conveys the most unconditional, purest of love. Bravo.

[Bryan Irion]

Thank you for appreciating this work

[Robert Haigh]

Love is the greatest thing on earth. It can inspire the poets, and make the ordinary person feel like a king or queen! Even when love fails, we look for it again. An expressive write.

[Bryan Irion]

thank you very much sir

[Swati Nayak]

Beautiful poetry , Bryan.
Loved the way you praise the one you love using metaphors;

[Bryan Irion]

O thank you for your appreciation ma'am.