Josh

A true story of me loving some one who I didnt know had sever depression

We were best friends
no one informed me in would ever end
no direction on how to deal
or how I should feel.
You always made me laugh
you were my other half
I'm glade you never loved me
so we could be brotherly
you never told me you suffered in your mind
I was totally blind
your depression was way beyond me
something I could not see
I should have ask why your voice shook when you said goodbye
It feels like you left me out to dry
your mom called sobbing out the news
about the bomb you couldent defuse
you had taken your life
and stabbed half of me with a knife
I wish I had wasnt so dumb
but to see where you were coming from
your gone now though
but im starting to understanding why you felt you had to go

Author's Note

ignore grammar please

Reviews

[Blue Belle]

OMG! Great write! It is so sad. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[Deidara]

Ah, a very interesting piece of art. A bit cryptic, especially at the end. I assume by left he just left, not what I think. Great work nonetheless though.

[J.R. Asor_28]

that's sad ...but i loved it! great job!

[AlexValkyrie]

You're a talented writer, and I hope that the process of writing this work was able to bring you some closure or healing.