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A Poem by isus

Looking through the window of my kitchen floor
thinking how it is to breathe again,
out of nowhere time turns old,
and what I see is hollow frame.

Eyes turn red and big and blue
- that's what only matter
in this space of open room
where they helter skelter.

And some people smiled, other just turned grey,
I wonder is it hard to die on sunny day,
wasn't easy, we can better - man from mist will say.

And mind is in my hand, he tries to understand,
but he will never can.
I only seem to know colors that I see
and sounds surrounding me.

© 2013 isus


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thinking how it is to breath again. That's very a thought provoking line - a mental coming out of darkness type line. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

im glad you find it good, thank you :)
This piece has a great rhythm, and a dark mood. Well done, Isus!

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
Very well done my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thank you man :)
This is so well rhymed! Flawless rhythm

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

isus

10 Years Ago

oh, thank you very much my dear :)
A really beautiful poem. Would like to read more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

isus

10 Years Ago

thank you on your words, i really appreciate. there will be more don't worry :)
I would really like to read some more of your poetry, this is such a masterpiece to me

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thank you :)

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brod na savi, Croatia



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