Misinterpreted wordS

Misinterpreted wordS

A Poem by isus

After all these years
I found my violin
with all the things
without her bow
for all I know
is to play guitar
and sound that's forming
in liquid foams
lasts for moment
of the tan sand.

Desert around us is
bending city of shade,
making us all hungry and in
the wish of poison

© 2014 isus


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Play on the violin for me and I'll dance for you

Posted 6 Years Ago


isus

6 Years Ago

would you dance around it if i burn it?
Norah

6 Years Ago

only if it amuses you
isus

6 Years Ago

it would for shure :D
it is a very well written poem.

The way you give us, reader a message that how we misunderstand several things is fantastic.

thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


isus

7 Years Ago

thanx for reading
Irenic

7 Years Ago

..............................................:)
Wow I really like the ending, last stanza, what interesting imagery! Trying to picture a desert as a bending city of shade and it's making us hungry and wishing for poison, it is utterly amazing, I'm not even joking! Bravo, bravo!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

are you shure you're not joking :p glad you like it :D
Frontier

9 Years Ago

Not joking! I wouldn't be surprised to see that part in a poem of a well-known poet!
isus

9 Years Ago

well i think that could be a compliment, thank you :)
Nice,short but very good,really really good one!

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

thanx Kirakishou :)
Really powerful and short! Like a tequila shot! Great stuff.

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

hhehe i like the comparison :D
Thought provoking and random.
I like it! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

thanx blue
Bluefire

9 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
Intreguing write. Short and quick tot he point. Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

to the what point? :)
I am not even going to attempt an interpretation, but just to say... awesome imagery, isus!

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

thanx Lori :)
very unique! Is it a palindrome? I just read it backwards too and it still made since and was just as beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

no, it was most random, so cool you notice it :D
A lot of imagination and human nature in this piece...a relatively small work in which you've managed to say many things, enough to truly make the reader think. In light of the title, and my notorious history of badly misinterpreting things, I am scared to say too much, but I will say that this one left an imprint on my imagination. It is what a poem should be on many levels...awesome work Isus.

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

don't worry about misinterpreting because it's here for you and me to interprete it on our ways all .. read more

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isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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