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A Poem by isus

exiled from your mind

finding shelter in my own,

but there is no sound

and i'm alone, with only shadow

 

i wonder if that shadow is me

'cause there's no sun around to see

 

let me enter through the door

where the sunlight shines above

let me in and put me out...

 

i know i'm created to collect

and to share

but if you understand,

kill me

for it's my fault

and revive me

in the new world

© 2015 isus


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Why do we identify within the "missing" and then sit and wallow in our own wish it weren'ts...

Posted 8 Years Ago


isus

8 Years Ago

it's like we are blinded at those times, or like we have need to somehow blure our mind by things ir.. read more
Chris

8 Years Ago

we can only try to learn...sometimes our mind will let us and other times not.
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JC
An interesting melancholy piece that feels like the settling sun as you recognize and begin dealing with your loneliness. Dig it man.

Posted 8 Years Ago


isus

8 Years Ago

thanx on reading :)
Moral of the story is don't buy doors in which the suns comes from above but instead below that way the light is lower class, get it?

Posted 9 Years Ago


"And revive me...in the new world".

Our new world isn't going to be pretty hun.

I don't think you want to be revived there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


isus

9 Years Ago

new world doesn't mean same for us :)
Luna Zerimar

9 Years Ago

I guess so. x

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isus
isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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