Cup of coffee

with a little edit

Some cunning happenings occurred today;

volcano's vomiting Milky Way

and as I wonder what do I see

Moon is falling in my cup of coffee,

It seems there's no way to survive this foul day,

but I notice it has just begun.

Some would say- it's night, not day, there is no Sun,

and the checkboard is not fun without the light,

but I don't know what they meant to say and

as I have no time, I disappear from sight.

Unaligned words seeking endless meaning,

seemingly going well and succeeding

only to collapse like my shuttered mind

inadequate and unaware of what's next and what's behind.

sequence of events display itself nonlinear.

Reviews

[The Eggman]

"Moon is falling in my cup of coffee," every morning. Made me smile brother. I liked the piece, but verse 3 is the one that stands out. The word come from nothing and return to...nothing. Thanks

[isus]

thanx on constructiv critic man, it always help

[V]

Interesting choice of words. It reads quite entertaining though some lines read a bit clumsy, particularly in the first stanza. The other two read well.

[isus]

thanx on reading, i don't see it as final version

[V]

You're welcome. It's ok.