Cup of coffee

Cup of coffee

A Poem by isus
"

with a little edit

"
Some cunning happenings occurred today;
volcano's vomiting Milky Way
and as I wonder what do I see
Moon is falling in my cup of coffee,
It seems there's no way to survive this foul day,
but I notice it has just begun.

Some would say- it's night, not day, there is no Sun,
and the checkboard is not fun without the light,
but I don't know what they meant to say and
as I have no time, I disappear from sight.

Unaligned words seeking endless meaning,
seemingly going well and succeeding
only to collapse like my shuttered mind
inadequate and unaware of what's next and what's behind.

sequence of events display itself nonlinear.

© 2016 isus



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

"Moon is falling in my cup of coffee," every morning. Made me smile brother. I liked the piece, but verse 3 is the one that stands out. The word come from nothing and return to...nothing. Thanks

Posted 1 Month Ago


isus

1 Month Ago

thanx on constructiv critic man, it always help
Interesting choice of words. It reads quite entertaining though some lines read a bit clumsy, particularly in the first stanza. The other two read well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

thanx on reading, i don't see it as final version
Closed

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. It's ok.

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

244 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 7, 2016
Last Updated on April 7, 2016

Author

isus
isus

brod na savi, Croatia



About
nothing special. currently on earth somewhere. rather would be on moon. more..

Writing
What'd ya think What'd ya think

A Poem by isus


Funny moments Funny moments

A Poem by isus