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A Poem by isus
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Slow down, this is through the lenses.
While you're reading this sentence
Sun is raging more than ever,
and all that because of single thought.

Walking through city of lies I encounter this:

''Our logic inadequate,
truncated, lying in a pool of our own blood,
existing only within terms we ourselves created 
just to have something to have.''

This was written on the other wall:

''Wherever we go patterns we find
leads us further from perspectives
we had when we were poisoned by
''dimensions'' of space and time.''

Then I had to go home, but i haven't had one
for I am insect on this page,
and I am orange on the desk
just waiting for next oblivion to begun.

© 2016 isus



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Wonderfully done!
wise and unique!

''Our logic inadequate,
truncated, lying in a pool of our own blood,
existing only within terms we ourselves created
just to have something to have.''


Posted 5 Months Ago


isus

4 Months Ago

thanx on reading man
Tazeen Ahmed

4 Months Ago

Welcome!
Btw I'm a girl.
isus

4 Months Ago

oh, sorry :D
This is a great piece, different and unique but also very well written :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

isus

1 Year Ago

hey, i'm very glad you recognise this :)
Enjoyed this. Well done, thanks for submitting to the Pride in Poetry contest. Since I will be judging this for the contest I will not write about it here (yet) nor rate it. Once the contest is over, I may drop by to leave a better review. Take care and keep on writing poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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