Glagolitic insemination

Glagolitic insemination

A Poem by isus

Immortal bunch of idiots,
between things between thoughts-
sanctuary worth of leaving.
on the narrow desert edge.
life is worthless with a pledge
you gave to inner deamon
that inseminated god
And now I disappear you reappear,
using shadows to burn minds in fear,
not knowing I'll occur again
to obliterate all power gained
in illusion casted backwards

© 2016 isus



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I don't know what the fug this means specifically, I was thinking about it and then I read the other reviews... an emptiness came over me.

hahahahahha, it reads nice.

Normally I wouldn't comment without a better grasp but, the reviews... ah, they say so much nothing... this place is kind of retarded sometimes.

(untransperance? "i like the last two lines".... ha... hahha... NOTHING!!!)(empty)

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

maybe lsd or other psychedelic drugs would change that :p
Dead Alive Dave

1 Year Ago

Comrade.... morate nauciti druge jezike.
isus

1 Year Ago

izgleda...
Wow. Very powerful use of diction and syntax here! Nice job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dead Alive Dave

1 Year Ago

He has a very powerful dick.son
Dead Alive Dave

1 Year Ago

diction... I meant diction.. sorry it was a fugging typo.
Winslow Des Totes

1 Year Ago

Lol that's alright I got a good chuckle out of it! But yes I agree :)
There's a certain kind of untransparence about it but for the most part an interesting read. Somehow I like the first and last two lines the most, they work as a sort of frame for my understanding.

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

tnx Vanessa :)

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brod na savi, Croatia



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