I.M.E

I.M.E

A Poem by isus
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cooperated

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With nothing on my mind
I let this words colide
and travel to the end.

Deviation far behind
as a surface that will slide
and set us free in sand.

Take it, we all should know,
it may take some time,
but in slow perception, killing elegance lives
and noone is free untill we decide to give.

But
say your prayers and bulk up,
there are people to f**k up.
If you're medicated, faschist or saint
come to us we'll give you pain 
you can give to others.


© 2016 isus



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Hehe... Lovely. Seemingly an effortless crafting of lines...Almost as effortless as child's play. I like it. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

hey thanx. i dont find it good but it's ok i suppose :)
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1 Year Ago

Your style gets a bit getting used to, but I like it. További szép napot. :)
Oh wow.
You caught me off guard with that last bit.
Nifty poem, you have talent. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll get even better.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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isus
isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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