Dream 31

Dream 31

A Poem by isus

From oblivion summoned together with time,

As we are rising and falling down

In opaque and one-way sequenced events;

Time and time again as we descend

 

And ascend back from where we begun,

Belting a sunset with dream of the Sun.


© 2016 isus



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A well structured write on the surreal for me.

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

hey, glad you like this :))
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Kim
I learned a new word while reading this :P good work, its interesting and has a nice rhythm :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way your words hang together but I'm not really sure what it is about! I'm not very good at interpreting this type of poem but I know that they are not always literal. I guess the title is the clue. My dreams don't make much sense either. Bye the bye, should begun be began?
Regards,
Alan

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

thanx! its everithing you get out of it. just dont try so hard
Nice poem! opaque is an interesting word, I never heard it before. Tyfs!

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

well you learn every day i guess :)

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isus
isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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