It is both

It is both

A Poem by isus
"

A jedi's gotta do what a jesi's gotta do.

"

Sailing away with nothing on my mind and back,

And staying away only to come close;

Into dawn of atom I'm returning back,

I'm returning back not knowing what I saw.


Maybe I just wasn't there at all

Or my ''conscience'' had no other choice

But to choose oblivion before all

The other things I ever saw.


And if I can ask a question

'Bout all that I forgot

'Bout all those dreams and memories

Then I'm a liar or it's paradox.


© 2016 isus



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Was this poem real?
Maybe we'll never know.
Either way, sir, you're going to be a big deal.

Great work! Wish it was a little longer, but you are talented.

Posted 1 Month Ago


"Maybe I just wasn't there at all
Or my ''conscience'' had no other choice
But to choose oblivion before all
The other things I ever saw."
These lines are so relatable. What wouldn't one give to be in blissful oblivion away from the miseries of the world. Nicely penned :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I really like how flowy but tight the first stanza is...it made my mind expand and constrict

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

im so glad you like it :))

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isus
isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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