Break Me

Go on and laugh
Tell me I'm not good enough
I'll show you I am
Think what you want I know whats true

Who are you to put me down
To try and break me
Come on, try it
I've got the strength, you'll see

Break me!
Try it.
You can't
And never will

I'm me
You can't change it
My hearts too strong
Never broken.

Here to help
Others who have fallen
I'm in no way perfect
I've just learned a thing or two

Reviews

[iamkim]

You don't have to prove yourself to anybody who can't see your worth. They're not worthy of your time and effort. Those people who are really true to you need not to ask you to show them what you got or to show them what you can. Despite of your imperfections, they will accept you and treasure you perfectly!

You are who you are. Nobody knows your own self better than you do ;)

I love how you wrote this, very strong and neat! Keep it up!

[jay-lyse]

Honest and raw. Your words are powerful, no one should try to put someone else down or tell someone that their nothing. Everyone has a purpose in life.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

Very nice. It is very powerful. I loved it. It flowed very nicely and was a very amazing piece
good job!

[SweetHeart (:]

has alot of feelings. love it!! at the begining thats the best too me(:

[poems with feeling]

nice!!!!!!!! its a power pices , went i read it polls me in, tell me all thse emotes that you are feel.

[Angela]

I love this. I'll show them by being the strong one. It is they who are weak! Nice!