Feelings

Feelings

A Poem by itsmenabs

The more you love, even more, I expect
Your colourful social life is what I highly respect
You are the one and only,
Immense charm and innocence make you simply manly.

My emotional fluctuations and childish behaviour
Handled well by you, you are the real saviour!
Your kindness and virtue is appreciated
Take my love and friendship for granted!
Will pamper you as if you are a child
Will love you to the fullest making you wild.

Where friendship is highly valued
Than simply a physical love
Where selfishness is none
But trust and faith is above,
Where there is no place for doubts and arguments,
Where they feel each other's pain;
Without having to explain,
There lies peace and happiness




© 2017 itsmenabs



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I like this one as well.
Well composed, love the word choice, and the fact that I am able to connect, and become the character speaking, is another thing that I love.
I also love this line, ¨
My emotional fluctuations and childish behaviour
Handled well by you, you are the real saviour!¨
Love it!!

Posted 1 Week Ago


itsmenabs

1 Week Ago

Thanks dear for your comment :)
Emo_Cat

1 Week Ago

your welcome.
What a wonderful thought you envision here. The poet often wonders why things that bring him tears are so nonchalantly dismissed by others or why things which drive him to anger and righteous zeal are viewed as overreaction by some. But it is his duty to observe and to bring forth tears of sadness or joy...to promote beauty, truth and justice and to root out and expose ugliness, cruelty and injustice for all to see. So he becomes a conduit of empathy flowing between the hearts of his fellow man. The poet has trust and faith but he allows for the doubts, arguments and unbelief of others. In fact, he finds his purpose there. He is the scourge of the cynic and the champion of the downtrodden. I enjoyed your vision here, the common ground of mutual respect and empathy.

Posted 1 Week Ago


itsmenabs

1 Week Ago

Thanks for your time to read and ur comments, this feedback has motivated me to write more :)

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itsmenabs

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23 yrs old.....Seeking peace, love and happiness# my hobby is writing.. more..

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