Riddle Me This

Eviscerate the vindictive violation of vaccinated viruses inside of violets virginity

Condescending consequences fed lies to the cannibalistic nature carrying catatonic chaos

Pain perches upon patched lips filled with padding to break the fall between swinging pendulums

Heat hinders humid paragraphs of hyped humility divided by a handicap hypothesis

Sanity's second chance shortens shallowed schemes within scorched screams

Memorizing memories marred the flesh measured in melodies of macabre metaphors

Beat the bombs bouncing beyond the horizon in blasphemy bankrupt souls

The transit thought transplants tyranny throughout the shadows of timid tattered creatures

Defy decapitated desires before you are damasked for the demon you posses

Angels amputate apathy from the mouths of absent minded people who adapted addiction

Relinquish requiem rendered in repulsing relapses while the reaper chases you

Writers mend words in ways that walkaways wander through life wondering why 

Author's Note

And you all thought I was gone... I'm just getting started

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I knew you were close by.
"Writers mend words in ways that walkaways wander through life wondering why "
From real writers. Words must be written and told. Very good to have you back. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sethnicity]

^ This guy is a sick F*@k! get out of here!

[wordman]

stupid ,and pathetic, this is tk little

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

What to talk about dishonoring Vets today is memorial day what the hell are you doing talking s**t on this page on this day and your bullshit has nothing to do with poetry or this site let alone my husband and I

[wordman]

freedom of information,now let me see is that where any vet can get his or her records,you mean i can get yours all i have to do is ask,how great that is do you know how stupid you sound

[StolenValor]

you can verify if someone was in or not. it ain't hard dipshit. of course you don't get the "member copy" of the dd 214. why don't you just show a picture of yourself when you were in the army, maybe your records were lost. but you won't be doing that will you? Why? Because you're a liar who never served a day in his life. f****n loser.

[wordman]

no there not lost,i have them right here.and i have several pictures
but it`s none of your business,this really gets under your skin

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Please take this bs somewhere else thank you

[Davidgeo]

Wow... talk about overdoing it on a poetic device. Too much assonance man. Did you just get done watching V for Vendetta or something?

"Defy decapitated desires before you are damasked for the demon you posses" --- What? Is damasked one of those new 'gangsta' words or was that a typo? Anyway, that's bad writing... obvious and not deep, you're just rhyming... poorly. You're not a rapper dude.

"Relinquish requiem rendered in repulsing relapses while the reaper chases you" --- You're trying way too hard man. Seriously, don't write poetry if you've just watched V for Vendetta. This could of been a line from the movie it's so derivative.

"Heat hinders humid paragraphs of hyped humility divided by a handicap hypothesis" -- is this poem a parody or a joke? It doesn't seem like you're that kind of writer but this is sooooooo painfully stereotypical hack assonace rhyme tripe that I had to ask.

This was truly not a good poem; not average writing, this is bad writing D-/F

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Seems to me like your a jealous troll David Demeers who needs to read the dictionary or at the very least go back to school cause damasked is an actual real word but see I would not expect you to know that seeing how your not a real poet only a plagiarizing troll

[dartanyon jonez]

Favorite line right here: "Memorizing memories marred the flesh measured in melodies of macabre metaphors".

The word for the day is: alliteration! So many times have I read alliteration pieces where the author was just trying to use the same letter, regardless of whether it made literal sense. And even though I may have had to go over a line or two again for clarity, that's what I enjoy most about lyrics: going back to it to extract the meaning(s). Thanks, man.

[Jonny The Savage]

The alliteration is really nice in this piece. The imagery is quite good as well. But the complete lack of punctuation makes it a bit more difficult to read than it could be. I think this piece could really shine with a few minors edits.

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

this is breath-taking , the way you connect words together leaves a form of beauty that is so vivid and raw. Thank you for sharing.

[StolenValor]

Fruad City up in this b***h

plagiairising pile of s**t

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You are so PATHETIC we block you over and over and you keep making fake emails and poetry pages just to cyber stalk and harass us Please get your self some mental help there are amazing doctors out there who can actually help people like you

[wordman]

samantha you should be ashamed of your self going to du poetry and starting a fake site to harass poor old tk
ain`t you got any thing better to do why don`t you join the army so he can have something else to cry about lol

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

No kidding lol I sure love wasting my life online as he does with all his fake pages just to harass/talk to people its sad really that type of commutation must be all he can get

So I guess anyone with my name or a form of my name must all be me lol thats sane logic not lol wow just wow

This guy needs help

On a side note I still write everyday I just don't post everything for him to steal or claim was stolen Im not as post happy as I use to be Im sick of thief's taking my work than trying to say I stole it from them that is why I now send my poems to myself in fb messages to further help prove I am the original author and the time and date in which I first wrote it .... I suggest all poets do the same but than again you will have ppl like tk claim you photo shopped it all and same go's for videos tell me how is it that anything I say and prove is fake and all edited dose that not apply to everyone on the internet if everything can be edited than no one creates anything that is their what total bs and that shows me he is grasping at straws

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You know if everything can be edited and stole why than would I not steal a hit song make it look like I wrote it and sue why would I steal poems that are not making money ..... Well lets see I dont steal I create I write from my heart and soul my creations are like my babies I do not need to steal I can stand on my own skill whether I am famous or not I only write for myself and now for Stephen I need not fame I share my work to help and inspire others and to further my skill with constructive reviews

[wordman]

well don`t feel bad he says i steal and now he says i was never in the army,did you know isis will pay for information on all military personnel in iraq and afg,or who served there.but i`m sure he could be trusted,i saw a david demers on face book that was charged 6 times on domestic violence i wonder is this out very on t k it looked just like his photo and he sent one of his s**t heads to tell me my poem after the fall was a fake because i used the night before christmas lol don`t every body know thats 200 years old his name is terpsilhope a friend of tk

[wordman]

and he accused me of being sammy too

[wordman]

it is pure jealousy ,plain and simple

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Wow You know he is only harassing you because you stood up for Stephen and I right and I have told all my friends here to stay out of it for their protection Because they don't need to deal with his slander and harassment

[Sethnicity]

Love this Steve-O. I'm an illiteration fiend myself So Kudos.
Fun to write and stirs the wordsmith's pot!
Keep it up.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Please be careful if this guy sees you standing up for either one of us he will start to harass you and try to discredit you he will claim you are a fake that me made up or he may go the other route and tell you to kill yourself as he has us this crazy person has even told me to put bleach in my son's bottle to clean the gene pool

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

and yes I have kept up with the screenshots as further proof and we have even went to the law over this bs

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

yeah I fake screenshots are you an idiot I can film them so whatever slander all you want you look like an insane person

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You act as if I don't already know that and tell me why the hell I would have to fake anything as if I'm so good using Photoshop as if I would waste that kind of money on bs when I have a baby to spend money on. You act as if I've made money from my poetry I have nothing to hide but you on the other hand are the one cyber stalking me and that is the only reason I would get the law in on this to put a stop to you and your bullying I have nothing to prove to you or anyone here the right people will have full access to my laptop ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, AS IF THE PEOPLE HERE ARE NOT SICK OF YOUR S**T IF I WAS SUCH A FRAUD AND PLAGIARIZER CHARLIE WOULD NOT HAVE SENT ME AN APOLOGY AND REINSTATED MY PERMANENT BAN ... EVERYONE HERE KNOWS ONCE YOUR ACCOUNT IS BANNED YOU NEVER GET IT BACK AS YOU WELL KNOW OVER YOUR MASS BANNS AND FAKE PAGE AFTER FAKE PAGE

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

He did in fact apologize the ban was not temporary and none of my poems have been taken down I have never in my pretended to be rich I do not care about money I took care of my grandparents for 15 years they had no money to leave me nor did I care .... I was in a car accident with my aunt I took what money I got and bought a house and land and yes I in fact let my family live for free on my land you are the moron that needs to get your facts straight

I have never said nor claimed I have made money from my poetry my husband was the one who wanted to create a book of our poetry for us and if anyone bought a copy oh well we never thought for a second we would make a penny we are not out for money

You are a coward hiding in the shadows to ashamed to show your true face and true name because you are a bully and a troll

You must have no life nor family to waste your time cyber stalking me and slandering me with your lies

I am still on this site because I proved to charlie without a doubt that all the poems in question were 100% mine proved with many poetry websites and blogs that I have had til I found my home here 10 years ago on wc

Your quest against me and my husband is ineffective and no one here cares

Stop clogging up the news feed with your bullshit lies leave room for us real poets to actually read something of substance

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I have NEVER taken down anything I have around 1000 poems up just on this site alone .... Please tell me and all the good poets here what poem of mine has been taken down

GO ON NAME ONE ....

[wordman]

if you have a enemy at d u poetry,then he or she is a friend of mine .and you could be the doctor,read moreif you have a enemy at d u poetry,then he or she is a friend of mine .and you could be the doctor,
dam !!what a place to be. my dd214 is tattooed to my boot,i would be glad to give you my stamp of approval on your a*s ..

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

That thread was created by you you have countless fake pages here and I'm also assuming there as well with all this so called proof of theft why is it that I was able to prove to the mod here that my work was all mine the fact that I am here and so is all of my work speaks to the truth and no lie you spew to slander me does you any good

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

No wonder TKlittle started up his crap again seems I've been informed he has been causing the same drama on dup and got himself banned for good as the mods there don't allow for lies and slander

[StolenValor]

idiot. there was nothing to get, you have no service record. NONE, zero, nothing. you don't answer those questions because you can't answer any of those questions. you're a fraud with zero integrity. this has nothing to do with jealousy, you are probably too s****y of a person understand but some people actually do have integrity to along with the compulsion for justice. you are a fraud, a bully, a plagiarizer ("bring me all your flowers now" - you ripped off and renamed "a single rose") and overall piece of s**t in general. Sucks to be you Turdman.