Superman

Superman

A Poem by iveltac

Superman


Superman is super and duper.


He has no bloopers and is definitely not a mini cupper.


He fly’s through the air with the greatest of ease until he meets a good winter breeze.


It then freezes him and makes him sneeze.


When he sneezes the world gets the mizzles.

© 2015 iveltac


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I'm glad you clarified that superman isn't a mini cooper, I wasn't too sure about that for the longest time. This made me smile a little, which is just what I needed. Good job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Thanks Dan.
A little goofy and fun. nice job. Keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing Willard.
Great write!!! I love the rhythm of the poem and how it all flows together!!!! And please check,out my work as well thank you and keep writing!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing Heart. I will go loook at your work.
Heartful5160

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. And your welcome.
This is actually hilarious! Wait, did superman just sneeze? Because I think I got the mizzles lol JK

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

:p Thanks CG.
I am sure that this appeals to a lot of the readers out there in our poets community. I myself thought it was cute but, I have personal issues dealing with silliness. Please excuse my lukewarm review!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Thats fine perk. Thanks for taking the time to review anyways.
Really fun and whimsical, not afraid to be silly, like a good old Superman comic from the 50s or 60s. Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Thank you Tom for reviewing it. Im glad you liked it.
mizzles? hehe! I love that word!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

lol yeah comes in handy.
when he sneezed he went back in time now he`s clark kent trying to meet a deadline lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

ok so far over the past week we have gotten over 400 comments done down there. So Luvs2write review.. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

sounds like fun
iveltac

8 Years Ago

lol ok well when you want to join just go to the very first review on this story and tada your there.. read more
Nice flow of words! Checkout Crash Test Dummies song, "The Superman Song".

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Glad you liked it.
dan

8 Years Ago

For musical accompaniment I'd prefer 3 Doors Down's "Kryptonite." super
Hehe loved the randomness of this! Made me smile!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iveltac

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing it fallen.

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iveltac
iveltac

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