Stop me Save me

I wrote this last night... when I couldn't sleep... It wasn't written to be posted at first, but I want to see what you all think about it.

Someone stop me. Anyone stop me.
Someone save me. Anyone save me.

If you knew what I went through...
You wouldn't want me.

Someone stop me. Anyone stop me.

If you only knew...
You would never speak to me.

Someone save me. Anyone save me.

I feel like I only have one place to go...
A place where no good comes to anyone.

Someone. Anyone.

There's nowhere else for me to go.

Stop me. Save me.

Reviews

[Broken Hearted Faux]

I'll stop and save you, baby. Always. Halt a moment in time to reach out and take your hand =)

[guiltyascharged]

Very good, nicely said. Nice flow.

[EdgeOfDark]

Very well done, Izzy. The desperation and anguish are very palpable. Its a little frighting even ...

[Phear]

great job! i loved the style of it and i like how the reader has to imagine what is it they are "saving/stopping" you from. :)

[Brittany W]

I very much liked the repetition in the poem, its so short and simple yet it says so much. Great work.

[:DI laugh too much:D]

this was nice, the repetition is really creative
great job :]

[Lizy Coale]

hi. are you okay? text me? i feel like youre leaving things out of the journal that ought to be put in. dont make me worry without being properly informed.
&& you can come to me :D you know that! :p