Falling

Just... something...

Falling, falling, falling
so very fast, fast, fast.
Falling until I don't stand a chance.
Falling, falling, falling
Until I hit the ground and shatter
Falling until the sky disappears.
Falling, falling, falling
There's no one there to catch me.
Falling until no one really cares.
Falling, falling, falling
from where there was once so much pain
Falling, falling, falling
Until I can't ever hurt again.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the repetition in this poem...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

A lot of falling :) is the angel still alive? unique piece. love it!

[Dark Angel ~]

Thank you :3

[Megara]

cool.totally describes falling.

[Dark Angel ~]

Thanks :3

[Megara]

welcome:)

[Mio+Ritsu]

Sounds like a song ^_^ I like it