Larger Than Life

This life

has stretched

for what seems like

an eternity

these marks

are nothing but

crimson back-splashes

against the canvas of time

these words are relevant

to our bigger picture

these actions are petty

to the larger aspect 

our life

is just a speck

in the atmosphere 

Reviews

[Aya]

we really are so small, just gonna have to have a larger impact
great poem

[Chris]

many thoughts... paths to be wandered and considered...

[KAOlmsted]

Damn right. Well done, jenny. Thanks for the friend request.

-kimmer

[silver threaded queen]

Thanks... I just saw one of your comments on a story and really agreed with it... kind of person whom's work I would like to see :)

[lbertygirl98]

I really liked this piece:) I can relate to this view of life:) I am new to the site and looking to network with other poets:)

Thanks for sharing:)

chrissy

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Jenny, great write, hey, sorry for everything

[silver threaded queen]

s'all good :P

[Victoria Elizabeth]

just wanted to let you know, this might be my last day on writerscafe

[silver threaded queen]

??pourquoi?

[Victoria Elizabeth]

sami

[silver threaded queen]

ahhh...

[unshakenScene]

THIS IS AH-MAZING!!!!!

[silver threaded queen]

thank you!

[unshakenScene]

yupps

[Sami Geiger]

AMAZING!

[silver threaded queen]

s'hanks :P