Rainbow

I am but a lost soul

 

the rainbows on oil scum

 

what you see

 

is what I want you to

 

you call me deep

 

yet I am just a shallow pool on the streets

 

I am but a figment of your imagination

 

the rainbows on oil scum

Reviews

[Julius Whimbird]

Wow, this has a deep and powerful message behind it. I love every word you use and I can't really think of any advice to give except keep on writing!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful painting of the rainbow.......good.

[kdpgrahi]

Small but very powerful. Rainbow is the most beautiful aspect of the life, yes can be a figment of imagination. Rainbow are for a very limited period for which it has been analogous to the lost soul? Yes a good analogy.

I enjoyed the poem