No Longer There

you think of her as empty

but she is no longer empty

she is gone

you think of her as dull

nor is she dull anymore

she is faded

she reminds you as a third class pair of jeans

brand new at first

the faded

then torn

soon you are just using her to patch up newer jeans

then you are using her as buttons

then she is gone

where she went

you still do not know

but if you sit 

on a empty night

you will hear a faded voice

calling out your name

Reviews

[Victoria Elizabeth]

As being your friend, this is one of my favorite pieces. Yes, times have been tough and this is why we have friends. We've been through hell and back dealing with b*****s, s***s, and fakes. We have each other. Thanks for everything and I'm glad you've tried to help me but its not working thanks Jenny really.

[Ruth]

Beautiful! Loved this :) Voided lament, very lovely! xoxo

[Falling Leaf.]

Sorrowful and haunting. I wish you the best of luck and send my kindest regards in your troubled times.
Happy writing,
Savannah

[Dr. Wood ?]

very nice write....I'm impressed(not depressed) A twisted mind is an advantage in the complex world of poetry