Walking with me

Walking with me

A Poem by Jack...
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Finding love walking beside you

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Walking with me

By Jack Ivey

 

 

Touched by a rain drop that falls from the sky

Calling on nature to be

Sadness ensues in the blink of an eye

Something is following me

 

Lost in a valley with hills all a’ flow

Turning my body around

Dreaming of life that I someday will know

Silently waiting the sound

 

Cascading shadows of cool on the day

Shelter I come to adore

Magical moments so vast in display

Finding what’s waiting in store

 

Taking a path that shall bend on the turn

Corners collect in my smile

Hearing the footsteps I’ve come now to yearn

Tossing my cares in a pile

 

Since I have cried and the sun comes to shine

Drying my tears when they fall

Leaving the fortress to fade off with time

Counting each stone in the wall

 

Desperately seeking my dreams to come true

Off in the promises shown

Stealing a look and then finding it’s you

If I had only just known

 

Here all along you have waited my hand

Caught in the simplest touch

Fingers entwined are a part of the plan

Shouting I missed this so much

 

Now as I walk I have love by my side

Beauty in forms now to be

Facing the sun as I no longer hide

Since you are walking with me

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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You have brought nature to me with such presence and reality once again. Magical

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my poem. Thank you for the kind words.
Lovely things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks my friend
Acer

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.
A great poem about love...it's the little things that makes it even better...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much
Wonderful rhyming tapestry you've created. A lovely tribute to love!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words.
It's nice to know that people still believe in candy canes and marshmellows.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Yeah, my heart has a sweet tooth. Thanks.
Lily Mae

11 Years Ago

:) xo
I tip my hat to you and bow all in the same breath. This is incredibly lovely, and I'm so envious of your skill to rhyme without making it sound staged or corny. Amazing! It flows from one stanza to the next in it's adorning message. Nice one Jack...I thoroughly enjoyed this read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda, I appreciate it. FYI - I know that life and love are not all candy canes and marshmal.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What? No marshmallow doves? ;-)
My pleasure....
Facing the sun as I no longer hide
Since you are walking with me

how beautiful and I loved the shift of being hopeless and alone to the feel of company and love again.
thanks for writing and sharing this Jack :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Dalia

11 Years Ago

your welcome.
So, so beautiful really brings true love to light and touches your heart with its warmth. Thank you for sharing such beauty with us Jack.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting Carolann. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Such an amazing feeling when you know the person you want to be with is right there always by your side.... no matter what.

A beautiful testimony to your true love.....



Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
There you go with those rhymes again ;-) Beautifully done, Jack...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Yeah, I just can't seem to help myself. Thanks.
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.

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Added on February 5, 2013
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San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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