Snow Cone?

Snow Cone?

A Poem by Jack...
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Just some Friday morning giberrish

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Snow cone?

By jack

 

I saw a snow cone ride his bike

out in the dark this afternoon

He wondered why his hair was green,

he couldn’t see the month of June

 

He pedaled hard to get somewhere,

he didn’t know had not belonged

And whistled as a snow cone will

a winter weather raindrop song

 

He hated riding bikes uphill

because his legs were way too short

And eating apples on the beach

will always be his favorite sport

 

He took a nap on his front lawn,

while flowers grew along the street

The music from the ice cream truck

just woke him up for something sweet

 

But as the sun began to shine

his head would quickly start to melt

His pants would fall down as he rode

if not for his new birthday belt

 

Now you must know I made this up,

a snow cone can not ride a bike

But neither can a bowl of oatmeal,

that I swear would not be right

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Hahahaha, you've made me laugh so much my friend - this is amazing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks my friend. Just a little fun and craziness one day.
lmbo Jack... lolol... Im going to try and pull some fun stuff from my pages later.. Thank you hun.. Im smiling right now. Hope it lasts.. xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rose. I thought this might make you smile.
Ha! Take THAT Wordsworth! xD Great stuff here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I was in a crazy mood when I wrote this, unlike right now when I'm in an ultra-crazy mood.
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Crazy looks good on you...xD
such a fun read! thanks for the smile and chuckle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

You are welcome Mary, thanks for reading.
A smiley in the form of a jolly write.
Jolly well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Always a pleasure Jack to read your work.
Sometimes in few words I pay my respects sometimes .. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much for that, it really makes my day.
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

I mean it and i would write the same for another handful select few even though I hardly knew them i.. read more
A nice and imaginative poem. I liked the humor a lot too. Do we get to read about the bowl of oatmeal next? :)
Thanks.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

You never know, there just might be a bowl of oatmeal poem in the future.
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

I am sure that would be nice to read! Thank you.
Very humorous and fun !! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Debbie_Philly

11 Years Ago

Yes it is.... I went to a few... I liked the Irish themed and the Italian themed show... So beautif.. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

The magic garden is one of my favorite places. I think about it often. The last time I was up there .. read more
Debbie_Philly

11 Years Ago

Oh your so right about that... the roll makes the difference ;)
love it...tell the snow cone happy belated from me
this is very adorable thank you for the giggle*)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I was in a crazy mood. Thanks Holly.
This sounds a bit like the Jaberwok...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Marie, just a moment of fun
I am very disappointed of this poem. I am very disheartened that you had the snow cone ride a bike. That was very discourteous of you, Jack. You could have let him ride a foot scooter instead since he got short legs. Try putting yourself on his shoes. Lol, just kidding. This is an awesome poem and it offered a good laugh. Loved it. It made me feel really young. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I was hoping to make people smile with this one.
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome *_^

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Added on February 15, 2013
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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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