One lone loving heart

One lone loving heart

A Poem by Jack...
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Love, when two hearts beat as one

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One lone loving heart

by Jack

 

O’er the frozen mountain dreams of castles bathed in snow

Chilly winter mornings neath a warming season glow

To rest before the fire and the flames of life do span

Comforting a single touch afforded by thy hand

 

O’ wintered fir of crystalline thy branches flocked in white

Before a wooded foot bridge that doth lead into the night

My heart it beats amazingly of pleasures it has known

Foreseeing down this ivory path I shall not walk alone

 

Tiny tears of ice take form unlike the others wing

Purified by voices heard as perfect angels sing

I have met an angel of persuaded visions true

An outline of my life I see while gazing upon you

 

Life’s a vast confusion in the minds of those who fear

Standing in the shadows lest the many find them here

Lonely in the barren fields a’ waiting summers feast

Forgotten yields of golden grains to fold amongst the crease

 

I for one ring joyous as my heart doth bear the fame

Of love which sent by angels finds my happiness is sane

Against of moonlit valley on this twilight frozen hill

To take within my sanction all the wisdom it does fill

 

My world is glad of passion and affections now to grow

O’er fortunes of a kindred heart that I have come to know

Exultations sound your name; my trumpets loudly blare

While jubilation makes its mark on moments we do share

 

My life it lives and breathes the gift of your most precious love

Upon the wings O’ gossamer doth float my truth above

Rejoicing in thy beauty bearing rays of ever light

To carry me within thy heart this a chilly winter’s night

 

If it doth need one thousand breathes of languish as I speak

My quest shall not end premature for thou sweet love I seek

Of greatest mountains majesty to pass their jagged rim

Forever I will fight the steep to lay with you again

 

Caverns deep, though they may form here neath my worn out shoes

Never shall I end my dream of perfect love I choose

Walls of stone built to the sky in lengths above this ground

Never shall detour me from thy taste which I hath found

 

Dark of night nor blizzard force shall garner in my way

For I am but a man with mighty visions of the day

O’ of the end my days are sweet of perfumed fragrance free

For I shall find love evermore, my angel comes for me

 

My kingdom stands for winter’s portrait pristine in its view

Though beauty found does not approach the beauty that is you

Circumstance doth render us so desperately apart

How fortunate for us we share but one lone loving heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 Jack...



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Jack...
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Exquisite, just breathtaking poetry on this page Jack, it's reads like a prayer. I was enveloped by each line, I can't begin to tell you how affecting this one is. I'm overwhelmed by it's beauty and intensity. This is going right on the shelf and my hard drive also...if I could give it 1000 I would do so...perfection on the page my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

I am speechless, wow, such wonderful words coming from my favorite poet. Thank you from the bottom o.. read more
WoW.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thanks
As ever, your poetry never ceases to amaze me with its beauty. :) Amazing work!! ^_^

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend. i always look forward to your reviews. You bring a smile to my face.
InsanityWriter

4 Years Ago

And you bring one to mine. ^_^ I'm always happy to read your works! (:
such heavenly beauty and love reflect from this piece. Made me a little sad. Wonderful sir!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
Romance is in the air, or so it seems, great poem, displays maybe what we need to see more in our modern society (friends, love...) not this coldness...well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jack...

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Nick
OMG! I think this HAS to be my favorite of yours. This was so romantic and sweet.... there is so many amazing lines.... definitely my favorite from you, Jack.

"Though beauty found does not approach the beauty that is you"

Loved this line..... You get more amazing each write, I read!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jack...

5 Years Ago

Thank you for leaving this wonderful review and bring immense happiness to my day.
s y e

5 Years Ago

You're sweet, anytime Jack!
OH this is romantic and beautifully penned. It has that old world feel to it as though written a couple of centuries ago. Beautiful, refined poetry. Nice!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jack...

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I am happy you chose this one to read. Thank you for kind words.
Ah, the place where we leave our hearts and sense lays heavy on your piece, well done, good read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jack...

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Thomas Fitzgerald

5 Years Ago

your welcome.
There are times when such language has its place. This is one of them. Unashamed romance.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jack...

5 Years Ago

ken, I do appreciate your kind words, Thank you so much.
Jack..........this is simply beautiful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jack...

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Dear Neva. Your sweet words always make me smile.

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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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