One lone loving heart

One lone loving heart

A Poem by Jack...
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Love, when two hearts beat as one

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One lone loving heart

by Jack

 

O’er the frozen mountain dreams of castles bathed in snow

Chilly winter mornings neath a warming season glow

To rest before the fire and the flames of life do span

Comforting a single touch afforded by thy hand

 

O’ wintered fir of crystalline thy branches flocked in white

Before a wooded foot bridge that doth lead into the night

My heart it beats amazingly of pleasures it has known

Foreseeing down this ivory path I shall not walk alone

 

Tiny tears of ice take form unlike the others wing

Purified by voices heard as perfect angels sing

I have met an angel of persuaded visions true

An outline of my life I see while gazing upon you

 

Life’s a vast confusion in the minds of those who fear

Standing in the shadows lest the many find them here

Lonely in the barren fields a’ waiting summers feast

Forgotten yields of golden grains to fold amongst the crease

 

I for one ring joyous as my heart doth bear the fame

Of love which sent by angels finds my happiness is sane

Against of moonlit valley on this twilight frozen hill

To take within my sanction all the wisdom it does fill

 

My world is glad of passion and affections now to grow

O’er fortunes of a kindred heart that I have come to know

Exultations sound your name; my trumpets loudly blare

While jubilation makes its mark on moments we do share

 

My life it lives and breathes the gift of your most precious love

Upon the wings O’ gossamer doth float my truth above

Rejoicing in thy beauty bearing rays of ever light

To carry me within thy heart this a chilly winter’s night

 

If it doth need one thousand breathes of languish as I speak

My quest shall not end premature for thou sweet love I seek

Of greatest mountains majesty to pass their jagged rim

Forever I will fight the steep to lay with you again

 

Caverns deep, though they may form here neath my worn out shoes

Never shall I end my dream of perfect love I choose

Walls of stone built to the sky in lengths above this ground

Never shall detour me from thy taste which I hath found

 

Dark of night nor blizzard force shall garner in my way

For I am but a man with mighty visions of the day

O’ of the end my days are sweet of perfumed fragrance free

For I shall find love evermore, my angel comes for me

 

My kingdom stands for winter’s portrait pristine in its view

Though beauty found does not approach the beauty that is you

Circumstance doth render us so desperately apart

How fortunate for us we share but one lone loving heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 Jack...



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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Bravo! This is another brilliant piece from a great writer. You really amazed me of how brilliant you are.
How lucky we are finding our one true love, to be our companion for better or for worst.
I love this! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words
This piece transported me to another dimension and lifted my spirits; it has such a deeply, heartfelt lovely tribute to love and possibilities that it really warms my heart. The idea that nothing can stop a love from finding it's other half,
"Walls of stone built to the sky in lengths above this ground Never shall detour me from thy taste which I hath found" evocative of a knight in shining armor who stops at noting to join with or find his love...Such romance flowing from your pen!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear sweet Veronica. Your comments are more beautiul than any poem I could have.. read more
This is so beautiful..you really are a romantic Jack..how you keep coming up with these masterpieces I'll never know..Kathie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kathie. Sometimes I wonder that myself
'Dark of night nor blizzard force shall garner in my way
For I am but a man with mighty visions of the day
O’ of the end my days are sweet of perfumed fragrance free
For I shall find love evermore, my angel comes for me'

Beautiful content, beautiful structure. Poetry at its best, writing to remember, echoes of the finest scribes.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words my friend.
"My life it lives and breathes the gift of your most precious love

Upon the wings O’ gossamer doth float my truth above

Rejoicing in thy beauty bearing rays of ever light

To carry me within thy heart this a chilly winter’s night"
Awesome write Jack. When we read your poems as if we are on gossamer wings of love and beauty. You bring the beauty of seasons in your fine wrods...:)


Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear friend.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)
I really got into this. We all want to have THAT love. Love, when one HAS it, is priceless. It reminds of certain renowned poets of those days. Some like what jabob e-c said. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you stopping by and checking this out.
BlackRose

4 Years Ago

Very wecome
one lone loving heart....a glorious write
the way you share your words is so touching
I love how your mind works
wonderful title and thoughts
thank you fine sir

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Holly. I smile when you read my work.
thank you for writing!


this is like a perfect blend of shakespeare and frost...

but more accessible than either of those "fairly decent" wordsmiths..
:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Jacob. What a wonderful compliment you have paid me this morning.
Speechless Jack. One of your best - and that's a hard thing to say as all of your writings are superb. Love complete, fulfilling and shared - what we all dream of, and strive for, but often times... only skirt the edges of such bliss.
Excellent, excellent writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much Dear Sera and good morning to you.
Emerald Seas

4 Years Ago

Good morning! ;-)
Oh Jack you may have outdone yourself.. this is absolutely breath taking.. Ir reads like I am back reading our of a book of famous poets.. Just so lovely..

"Of greatest mountains majesty to pass their jagged rim
Forever I will fight the steep to lay with you again" heavy sigh... xo Rose

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear sweet Rose for your always kind and heart touching words.
shallimarRose

4 Years Ago

your welcome.. sorry about the type-os its 5:00 am here and im typing blind.. ha!! xoxo

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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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