Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

A Poem by Jack...
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Passionate love...always

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Breathless, endearing, unending desire

 

 

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Built on this foundation true

Providing all that your heart may require

Sending my love up to you

Pastels so vivid my mind seems to dance

Softly aglow on your face

Reaching for hope in a shade of romance

Lost and alone in this place

 

Smile so that I may see you

Laugh for I so long to hear

Whisper to me that our love is so true

Relieve my every fear

 

Catch me I think I am falling

Deeply within your sweet heart

Hold me, my love it is calling

That never the two of us part

 

Truly I sing of your praises my love

Pedestals beneath your feet

Lifting so that you remain up above

Making my world so complete

Sunlight, alone seems to capture your sheen

Warm as the day comes to be

Places now sit at the edge of my dreams

Won’t you please come here with me

 

Take me, for I am your only

Feel me, I long for you touch 

Fill in my soul ever lonely

You I have needed so much

 

Ask and I’ll answer you loudly

If love it can last evermore

Listen, I say it so proudly

You are the one I adore

 

Sitting in awe of affectionate power

Cool is the feel on my skin

Shelter does come from a passing day shower

Since you have let me come in

Now till the day that my life does expire

I will forever love you

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Built on this foundation true

 

 

 


© 2013 Jack...



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Jack...
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Absolutely Beautifully written from the heart.
This could be to the one that you love or to the one you dream of loving.
"Ask and I’ll answer you loudly
If love it can last evermore
Listen, I say it so proudly
You are the one I adore" ~ This is my favorite....for if the world shouted there love one for another maybe we would have less hate and discontent floating around.



Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautiful. :) Excellent piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend.
Jack you are such a romantic..if you keep this kind of writing up..you will have most of the females on the site after you..Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Will that include you Valentine? :) Thanks so much my friend for always leaving such a nice review... read more
there is a very lucky lady somewhere Jack, your loving tribute to her is wonderful...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Stella
I love this side to your creativeness Jack...

Absolutely Beautifully penned...

YB

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind and sweet words.
This is beautiful. I loved it thank you for sharing.

Best wishes
~kelly

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kelly
Wow. I'll post it again, Wow. This is absolutely incredible. Jack you ARE the swooning romantic of the WC. I'm telling you bro you are KILLING the ladies on this site with this stuff. So while I'm pissing them off and making up with them you're over here wooing them. You are a smooth operator.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you sir. :)>
I always love reading your work, this is no exception. Lovely!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Neva, my friend, you are truly appreciated by me. Thank you so much.
what a humble image of love and adoration! :) nicely written.....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thanks so very much
This is proof positive, that a man can be romantic. I do believe you saw within her soul. A true vision of poetic bliss.

Ask and I’ll answer you loudly
If love it can last evermore
Listen, I say it so proudly
You are the one I adore

A beautiful confesson of true love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words

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Added on April 24, 2013
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Tags: love, desire, passion

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



About
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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