Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

A Poem by Jack...
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Passionate love...always

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Breathless, endearing, unending desire

 

 

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Built on this foundation true

Providing all that your heart may require

Sending my love up to you

Pastels so vivid my mind seems to dance

Softly aglow on your face

Reaching for hope in a shade of romance

Lost and alone in this place

 

Smile so that I may see you

Laugh for I so long to hear

Whisper to me that our love is so true

Relieve my every fear

 

Catch me I think I am falling

Deeply within your sweet heart

Hold me, my love it is calling

That never the two of us part

 

Truly I sing of your praises my love

Pedestals beneath your feet

Lifting so that you remain up above

Making my world so complete

Sunlight, alone seems to capture your sheen

Warm as the day comes to be

Places now sit at the edge of my dreams

Won’t you please come here with me

 

Take me, for I am your only

Feel me, I long for you touch 

Fill in my soul ever lonely

You I have needed so much

 

Ask and I’ll answer you loudly

If love it can last evermore

Listen, I say it so proudly

You are the one I adore

 

Sitting in awe of affectionate power

Cool is the feel on my skin

Shelter does come from a passing day shower

Since you have let me come in

Now till the day that my life does expire

I will forever love you

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Built on this foundation true

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Sigh...why can't real life romances be like your poetry is what I want to know? Can't say enough, and I'm sure you're sick of hearing me say lovely, but it IS just blissfully lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

As long as you never tire of hearing me say "amazing" I will never tire of hearing you say "Lovely"... read more
always....put her up high on that pedestal, revere her, adore her, bask in the glory that is she...and treat her as a goddess for all to see. don't let a day go by without giving 100% of what you feel, and never turn your back to her needs, her desires, her love. treasure what you have found and never let it go.this is drop dead gorgeous, jack. is this a fantasy piece, or are we smitten? either way, it is a beautiful poem, worthy of a lofty perch!

Posted 11 Years Ago


quinfinn

11 Years Ago

ah, avoiding the question.....nice segue! you're welcome....
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Sorry sir, I missed the question...The answer is yes
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

good on ya, sir, godspeed and good luck!
Places now sit at the edge of my dreams. Exquisite. This is warm and romantic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tammy. I do appreciate you.
So beautiful and loving,
very nicely presented

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.

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Added on April 24, 2013
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Tags: love, desire, passion

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



About
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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