Love Boat Senryu

Love Boat Senryu

A Poem by Jack...
"

Would you drop anchor with me?

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If hearts were a ship

On an endless sea of love

Would you sail with me?

 

 

 


© 2013 Jack...



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Ahhh clever! I like this one :D

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much.
Nice poem, I would have pluralized ship though.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thanks Mark. I actually thought about that, but I felt it would change the entire meaning of the pie.. read more
Aw. that's Hallmark Card worthy. Anyone would love that!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much Tammy. Glad you liked it.
love to... nice work..... :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thank you so very much.
I would love to :)
Jack simple and way better.. Work :)
You master in showcasing simple words with best way :) Cheers!
I love reading more and more from you now :)
- Singh :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thank you so very much my friend. I am humbled by your words.
'Love! Exciting and new. Come aboard! We're expecting you. Love! Life's sweetest reward. Let it flow! It floats back to you. The Love Boat! Soon we'll be making another run. The Love Boat! Promises something for everyone. Set a course for adventure, your mind on a new romance. Love, won't hurt anymore. It's an open smile, on a friendly shore! It's looove! Welcome aboard! It's loooove!'

Is it sad that I know those lyrics by heart? Ha! Lovely little senryu, Jack! Angi~

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

What's sad is I had that song stuck in my head most of the day yesterday after I wrote this and now .. read more
Angi

8 Months Ago

Ha! Well, take comfort in knowing many people are singing with you!
So sweet...seriously, Jack! You are a true romantic at heart, aren't you? This is something that I would just love to find tucked under my door, or in the pages of my notebook or even my pocketbook. Such lovely words with such feeling.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much Sarah. Feel free to print it out and place it in your purse anytime.
Bloody well done sir!

But based upon the title I was hoping for Bery Convey and Charo making an appearance.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Bert Convey, now there is a name I haven't heard in some time. Sounds like a good riddle for the rad.. read more
Aww.. so sweet and romantic.. love this, Jack!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thank you so very much Lori.
Ah. Beautiful Senryu Jack...............

Posted 8 Months Ago


Jack...

8 Months Ago

Thank you sir.

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San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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