Marie Senryu

This ones for you Marie

 

On a quiet street

three bed, two bath and must be

a Gregory House

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Okay this one is going to blow Marie's skirt up way high, that's her man!

[Jack...]

yeah if I could get her to read it...sheesh.

[Frieda P]

If he knew who was on the page, she'd come running!!

[emmajoy]

A wonderfully constructed senryu to fit the woman, such a cleverly selected present, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Emma, now if I can only get her to read it. :)

[emmajoy]

Flicker your eyelashes! :))))

[Rita L. Sev]

I am imagining you walking around counting syllables, thinking of your WC friends... :)

[Jack...]

Could be, thanks so much

[Baby Ricochet]

Awesome Senryu. 25 characters God@#**t!!

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend.

[Nick.B]

Great one, very nice done

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Zahra]

another great senryu, clever and well crafted. Very nice,

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Zahra. I am happy you are enjoying these with me.

[Zahra]

Yeah i am :)