I'll always love you

The title says it all

 

I’ll always love you

Yes it is true

When you are happy

When you are blue

When you are sleeping

When you are not

When it is winter

When it is hot

Out on a picnic

Sitting inside

Swinging on swings

Sliding on slides

If it is raining

If we are wet

I’ll always love you

That you can bet

If in a sailboat

Or in a car

For a short distance

Or very far

Up in an airplane

Out in the blue

Whatever it is

I’ll always love you

If we are singing

If we just talk

If we are running

Just taking a walk

If we are old

If we are new

If in the middle

I’ll always love you

If in a poem

If in a book

If we are cleaning

Preparing to cook

If in the pantry

Home from the store

If doing laundry

Scrubbing the floor

If we are shopping

If we are done

If we are tired

Of all of this fun

And if we don’t

Or if we do

Whatever it is

I’ll always love you

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

I see this on a valentine's day card. This is really adorable! As I've told you before, you're great with sweet talking :3

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Astro]

Very Seussian in it's delivery, but a fun way to say that you love someone. I could see it printed on a poster somewhere even if it is long.

[Jack...]

Yep, this was me having a little marathon rhyming poem fun. Thanks again.

[TL Boehm]

If Dr Seuss wrote love poetry - it would be happy and springy and light hearted like this. This is the type of poem that you cannot read without nodding and smiling!
A nice fresh breeze of poetry.

[Jack...]

Tammy you always make me smile. Thank you so much.

[Corset]

awww, what a gorgeous write, yes, I remember Jack! You are the Jack of hearts, you write beautifully, and usually rhyme, I like rhymes...though I like all poetry. You have a special skill at rhyming though, like Baby Ricochet, never skip a beat. I'll be back for sure. :) I subscribed so you won't get lost again :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. Still write rhyming but have been experimenting with free verse lately. Thanks again for stopping by.

[s y e]

Awwww, my Jackomantic! This is so you and so romantic, I love reading your loving writes, full of love and romance and you always ace them. I'm so behind on reading you and some others, catching up today as I'm off sick.

[Jack...]

Thanks my sweet friend. I hope you feel better soon.

[LadySoDivine]

That was very sweet, Jack. It was simple, but well said. I like the rhyming, it made the entire poem so easy to read. My favorite part was:
"If we are old
If we are new
If in the middle
I'll always love you."
At no matter what time, teenage years, childhood, adulthood or our old age, the love remains the same, like from the very first day. I really like that thought. Excellent job! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much LSD. Your reviews = my smiles

[Lydia Shutter]

A poem filled with innocence, real life, and romance. The short rhyming lines made the meaning flow easily and pleasantly. This was my favorite part:
If we are old

If we are new

If in the middle

I’ll always love you

Sounds like a great Valentine if you ask me, Jack. So very sweet. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Maybe I'll re-feature it in February. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You really ought to!

[Mark]

Wow, completely seamless. I don't think Dr. Seuss could've done any better! (I hope you don't take offense to that, I hold T.S. Geisel as the god of the rhyme.)

[Jack...]

No offense taken. Thanks so much Mark

[J. Kell]

This could definitely be read at someones marriage. Great rhyme throughout. Glad I read this, made me smile. Excellent job.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much for your visit today. I appreciate your kind words.

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is lovely. Sweet and romantic and so uplifting. A pleasure to read! :) Julie

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Julie, just a touch different than the last one I think? :) I truly do appreciate your kind words this afternoon.