Collaborations

 

 

 

Collaborations

 

When two pens come to meet

born of different places,

blending in ink of a free flow design

Curved on the corners

in destinies calling,

fate intercedes in the blink of an eye

 

Channeling thoughts

over miles of asphalt,

heartstrings are tied in a double bow knot

Digging through memories

once left for nothing,

built on the dreams that we soon had forgot

 

Ideas are spun

of a dual inspiration,

beauty unfolds like a fresh springtime bloom

Filling these faces

with smiles of mornings,

harmonic whispers now set to the tune

 

Poetic dreams

in a vibrant perspective,

touching a heart with these words ever sweet

Stanza’d collections

of eternal wishes,

found on the page when two pens come to meet

  

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Cara]

"when two pens come to meet" amazing write

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much my friend.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Your ending wraps this up so neat and precise.
The premise is strong and reflects through the writing.
Truly lovely and has great flow.
Poetic pairing with two pens that come together to form a collaboration.
Your title is fitting and defined in the writing.

[Jack...]

Thank you Josie. I have written a few collaborations since coming to this site and have thoroughly enjoyed each and every one of them.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

They can be fun and a learning experience.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Interesting and very well written piece.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[Pryde Foltz]

Poetic dreams
in a vibrant perspective,
touching a heart with these words ever sweet
Stanza’d collections
of eternal wishes,
found on the page when two pens come to meet

Quite elegant, this write, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Pryde. Always I appreciate you.

[Troy Henson]

Ah just great Jack. The meeting pens, ink and thoughts. Such a wonderful write.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Troy. Happy you liked this.

[Cody Williams]

I really like this Jack! I'm actually working on a collaborative story right now! Collaborating takes a lot of comprises! Thanks for sharing this great piece!

-CW

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Cory. Good luck with your collaboration.

[Rita L. Sev]

"When two pens come to meet..." You have shown how amazing that can be, Jack. This is a great tribute to the melding of minds...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rita.

[Ruth]

Beautiful Jack! The meeting of ink to ink and thoughts to thoughts is a humbling experience...you penned it beautifully x

[Jack...]

Thank you my sweet friend.

[Justine]

I think this might be one of my favorite poems from you so far. It speaks of possibilities and increased options when sharing, making for a delightfully upbeat read. "Beauty unfolds like a fresh springtime bloom" - I love that ! Justine :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Justine. I truly do appreciate your kind words.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Writing alone can produce great work...but writing together with someone else can produce greater. A great write!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate you stopping by.