Memorys are never forgotten

A poem about a personal experience about child abuse...I hope you feel the pain I do when I remember the memories...

Memorys are never forgottten



I find myself here once again,

Recalling the times from now and then

All the memories, so sad and dismal

Of you hurting me and being brutfall



I hate you dad for what you did

Shouting and screaming as I hid

As you searched the whole entire house

I stayed hidden quiet as a mouse



You finally saw me all curled up

As i let out a small hiccup

As I looked up it was no surprise

That i saw the evil in your eyes



I wondered “today what will it be”

It turned out to be your hand simply

With one hefty swipe down to my face

A silet tear i shed in disgrace



So many scars I have from those days

Have them on my body, I will always

I was your daughter, your only child

How could you do that to a child



Those memories haunt me everyday

In nightmares, daydreams, throughout the day

You are always there in my mind

Wherever I go, you I find

Author's Note

What do ou think i could change?
im not very happy with the last but one verse...

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I really liked this piece of writing, flowed so perfectly well....

And I loved it though but I guess the ending lines didn't concluded it very well!

You may rewrite them like -


Those memories haunt me everyday
In nightmares, daydreams, throughout the day
Wherever I go,you are always there in my mind
And in my memories you will always stay...

[All faded blue]

Personally I would like to see you be a little more "free form" with this. What I mean is don't be so concerned about making the end of sentences rhyme. It will allow you to really express these emotions and make others feel them as well. You truly have a good start, now play with it, if I can use that expression, and see what happens. And, I AM sorry you have had to experience this. It is never okay, glad you are writing to work through it all. Keep it up.

all faded blue

[Caitlin.]

That's really deep, so sorry for what you had to go through ♥.
One suggestion:
'All the memories, so sad and dismal
Of you hurting me and being brutfall'
I don't really think the second line rhymes all that well. I like the rest though -- great work!