Don' break up

Don' break up

A Poem by jadia4708au
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simple marriage story

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Don’t breakup as I had been yours

Number of beautiful dreams was ours

We decided to make it heaven

We cared for little things even

 

We were drawn initially by outer show

I too was immature and did not grow

We threw all our lots to beautiful dreamland

Moved hand in hand freely in fairy’s land

 

It was never you who let me down

You always praised my eyes brown

You just preferred me and not by noun

You had promised me let go even crown

 

I found earth so wonderful

All ponds and rivers had water full

Nature too appeared fine and not dull

App appeared wonderfully nice and cool

 

Clear sky with glittering bright stars

Silver shining rays seemed with no distance far

Suddenly it became known it was going to dry

It was going different way I don’t know why?

 

I had heard many times happy relation end very soon

There was to be autumn for end of boom

Nothing was to be worked out in closed room

Happiness was to end with decadence of gloom

 

Nothing was moving on expected lines

Everything in doldrums with absolutely no fines

What was I to do with sudden “U-turn?

Watch its early demise and tearfully mourn

 

I had offered everything that was to be done

All with sincerity and sparing efforts none

Still it was proving hard nuts to crack

Life train was not moving and skidding off the track

 

Life can move on easily with two fine wheels

Clear understanding with powerful will

What efforts do I make to make it more worthwhile?

Simple devotion and to walk for an extra mile

 

 

I am almost pushed to the deep corner

I have explored all possibilities to garner

I am not sure of succeeding in new Endeavour

I only want his support and not simple favor

 

I think it is crucial that both should hold together

No worldly things influence us or bother

We try to follow and understand each other

Though it is very simple to inch further

 

The total mess should end up in healthy relation

Break up must be ruled out as out of question

How to move further should be the main criteria?

Not to woo each other or making fresh plea

 

I will hold it fast unto end of life

You need not prove to be an ideal wife

What may make it worth while and trust worthy?

There should be real trust and not simple apathy

© 2010 jadia4708au


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jadia4708au
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Ahmedabad, India



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I am ex-serviceman from indian air force and a hobby writer. i write generally poems on al the subjects. i invite suggestions from all the memers and welcome it. My articles are published underthen.. more..

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