Kingdom of Lies

Kingdom of Lies

A Book by Kathleen
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Aaliyah lives a boring and carefree life in Glenavon. She yearns for adventure and is willing to give up her easy life as a princess for it. After careful planning, she leaves.

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© 2010 Kathleen



Author's Note

Kathleen
I'd love to hear your input--please critique it and help me improve my book. (I'll return the favor)

Here's the synopsis:

Aaliyah lives a restless life as a princess and feels the increasing pressure of becoming queen. She yearns for adventure and fun, but because she is a princess the rules are very rigid. Control of her life steadily dwindles and, in the end, it becomes the deciding factor of her dilemma. Shortly after celebrating her 15th birthday she escapes to the Surakut Forest- the quickest route to her chosen destination. Along the way she makes some friends and together they share many experiences. Toward the end, Aaliyah begins to realize the importance of her life and begins to wonder how much control she will ever have over it.

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I've read the whole book and I like it. :D

I was just expecting the royalty not the magus type but yeah, very good twist.

Chapter 1, I think, was thoroughly edited, but Chapter 3 needs more going over the lines.

Keep up the good job. I'll throw in improvements on the chapters as soon as I can. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wow mufasa yfghjjfddrgghgfff I just need the 25 letters













GOT eM

Posted 10 Months Ago


For some reason your first chapter is coming up as unpublished? *blink* definitely checking back later!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I've read the whole book and I like it. :D

I was just expecting the royalty not the magus type but yeah, very good twist.

Chapter 1, I think, was thoroughly edited, but Chapter 3 needs more going over the lines.

Keep up the good job. I'll throw in improvements on the chapters as soon as I can. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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I know its shocking, but I love to read and write in my spare time. Well, what can I say about me other than that...For starters, I enjoy playing golf and tennis for my high school (Varsity for bo.. more..

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