Watching

Watching

A Poem by jaime

Sometimes I watch you
when you're not aware.
Just admiring
the way you breathe.
Watching your eyes
resting.
The way your lashes lay-
A peaceful compliment
to your sleeping skin.

I love the smile and nod
of your eyes.
The distinct way you confirm
our love.
With the cool, calm gleam
of those Autumn pools.

I watch the reflection
in your eyes
That are full
of adoration.
And I'm grateful
the receiver is me.

© 2008 jaime


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oh how nice this is ,a dreamer is talking
and watching you eyes
Sometimes I watch you
when you're not aware.
Just admiring
the way you breathe.
Watching your eyes
resting.
I love the smile and nod
of your eyes.
The distinct way you confirm
our love.
With the cool, calm gleam
of those Autumn pools.

how nice how tender,you talk of him
you watch every move
for love is there and gives sight to see things no body else can
wonderful write keep the good work
lovely as always..

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sigh. To be, and to give love. Beautiful! Simply beautiful!

"The way your lashes lay-
A peaceful compliment
to your sleeping skin."

Sweet. Again, Sigh. =)


Posted 15 Years Ago



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