Seeing You Again

Seeing You Again

A Poem by J
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As I've said.True Friendships never end.

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I remember sand boxes and Barbie dolls
When we were 4 years old
A couple of years later
We have stories and secrets told
We eat Ice Cream and other sweets
My mom would give you some of my treats
We were best friends
We were sisters
We'd have campings during summers

One day you left and lived out of town
You said you'd come back
You left me with a frown
Years ,I waited out my window
We'd write letters to each other
I keep one under my pillow

One night I received a letter
It said you were coming back this June
I was so excited
I was going to see you really soon
The next day you came
We were happy,we were the same
Our looks and likes may be different now
But our friendship will always stay
Since then we're still together 
We have this necklace
There written:Best Friends Forever
I'm so glad you came back
I hope you'll never leave again
So that I'll never say these words below 
Again,I'll see you soon my friend

© 2010 J



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such an amazing piece , it really touched a lot , hope you and her stay friends forever and happy together , 'cause this poem really shows that you love each other , well done girl :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


this poem of yours is really great and perfectly penned...:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Well done. The flow needs tiny bit of work, but other than that- youre good! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aw, this is really a sweet poem :)
I can relate to this, only I moved away from my best friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice poem , i wish that friendship is as simple as that , but it's a good subject and you did a good job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked it . :) 10/10

Posted 7 Years Ago


awesome:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I agree with Jason about the flow. Other than that this is a very nice poem. It reminds me of my friends who have moved away or aren't in as much contact as I'd like .. either way they're still my friends :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 29, 2009
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