Heaven Above

This is another poem I wrote in fourth grade, around Valentine's Day, and I really remember it. I think that it is the only poem about love I have right now. I hope you enjoy... :D

There are many that I love,
But only one is sent from heaven above,
I will not mention the lover's name,
For one day he will fill with lots of fame,
Only then will I mention the one I love,
The one that is sent from heaven above,
He admitted himself he loves me too,
Unlike the way I feel about you.

Reviews

[Candy-pooh]

thnx!!

[Dove]

this is great and its soo sweet. I love it!

[stars are far]

this is so sweet i loved that :)

[Jocelin]

Wow... this is great! I loves it!

[Lively]

Very impressive and very well written.

[Dustin Reichmuth]

For a fourth grader, you sure were a good writer! This guy sure does sound like something special. Lovely write.

[WriteWiz99]

OMG! Who was this guy? Do I know him?

[BrynnaW.]

Wow this is really impressive for a Fourth grader! Good job! How true! He Loves me, He loves you, and we should love Him. :) Keep on writing!