The Place She Goes

A story of a woman whom felt so lost after her relationship ended she took the wrong way out. Possible she felt it was her only way.

As she sat there, the smell of wax filled the dark room.. The candle light flickered. She looks down at the photo of when her soul was once whole. As her face begin to moisten ,With tears She closed her eye once again, Trying to go back in her mind. Trying not to go out of her mind For this place, she goes he was once there, there memory still linger's in this place she can feel his skin. She still can remember how his lips once tasted. In which this place, her soul was once whole. Because in this bitter reality he will never be her's again. In that reality she will never be whole again. So she shall go, go,and go to the place where he is still hers. Out there, in the cruel real world she feels she will forever be lost. The way that she shall forever be. Her face becomes dry, For she knew it was time. As the bottle fell and roll across the floor The tears evaporate As she closes her eyes slowly, she says to no one. "As for now I will forever remain In that place, I shall no longer be"

 . ........Lost.....

Author's Note

This Is just a story. I wrote when I first started there maybe incorrect spelling/grammar. But I would still like your thoughts on the story alone how it made you feel. Could you picture what you was reading?

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

It's melancholic and effects a strong impression on the reader's mind... You have managed to pour the whole concept really well in less amount of words... The loneliness of the girl is definitely shows up in this write... Very well done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Teddybearlee]

As always, very impressive, very visual, easily pictured it all. I think you have a wonderful gift for imagery, and it inspired me to try and be more descriptive as well.