Blue Eyes

Blue Eyes

A Poem by Jason Nuciola

Her blue eyes are like an ocean that quenches the thirst of my heart.

 

 

My reflection is crystal clear.

 

 

I will swim in the ocean of her love for years to come.

 

 

In her blue eyes I can live forever.


© 2008 Jason Nuciola



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Beautiful, Jason! This is like a nice, long swim in the sea with your beloved one. A romantic tale that makes me feel warm all over. Great job.

Posted 7 Months Ago


amen. just sounded like it needed an amen at the end. Excellent ode to her baby blues!

Posted 7 Years Ago


deep passionate write....like her eyes i imagine. Nice work, short but moving. Like the way you've used the font and colour too. Good work....

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is beautiful, I hope she thought so too

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really great poem jason, your profile compared to your work
is simply halarious, brilliantly done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lest you drown if she cries... great poem jason, I'm sure she liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful piece of work. Well done.

I always tend to write in plain old default font but you have proven that colored font really makes a difference in the way the poem comes across when colored. It made my mind wander to ocean blue eyes. Bravo!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this, it's beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very short, but really a great expression of a deep love.

Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful expression of love. loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 9, 2008

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Jason Nuciola
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