The best 30 seconds of my life

The best 30 seconds of my life

A Story by jayanth
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everyone rewinds their life on things which we should have done and love the most at some point . Who knows whether you will be alive or not after that .

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                             THE BEST 30 SECONDS OF MY LIFE


daddy take me to the carnival please ‘ , the first thing I thought about . the life of a coastal guard is not easy . I remember everything that I’ll miss the most , FAMILY .  My 5 year old brave daughter and of course with the playfulness is always a joy to watch and my 10 year old son is who I’m very proud of , they wouldn’t know that I’ve noticed them so much , but the way he takes care of his sister reminds me of my siblings and my parents .

It was the other way around here , I was the youngest among the 5 of us , getting pampered by all 6 of them shouldn’t be surprising , oh the 6 of them includes my parents in it . I love them so much and speaking of love ,  my wife appears .

I was happy , I always wanted this . She should be the last thing I should think about . I always admired her , the way she balanced work and home which I’ve never done , and the love from her towards me hasn’t reduced a bit since the beginning  . She was the best thing that has ever happened in my life .

I have never thought about them ,with this love ,with this heart as I wish I could tell them , how much I love them . I felt the bullet doing its job in my body , well I said it before , life of a coastal guard is never an easy task, as I stare at the sky with the final smile and the final thought of thanking god for ‘THE BEST 30 SECONDS OF MY LIFE ‘.   


© 2017 jayanth



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jayanth
just a writing of an amateur who is trying to come up , your reviews are important for my growth . thank you in advance :)

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Heart wrenching end. I like your thoughts and the way you present the story elegantly in words.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


jayanth

2 Weeks Ago

thank you :)
Najam Us Saher

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome. ☺
Such a touching story. Really enjoy reading your stories...

Posted 1 Month Ago


jayanth

1 Month Ago

thank you , means alot :)
Nice work Jayanth ji....I loved reading it

Posted 4 Months Ago


jayanth

3 Months Ago

thank you :)
ahh... it was so touching....wonderful write...a very devoted one... if the limit was dersired to be within 300 words, then no worries, otherwise it could have been portrayed as a tragic story along with powerful dialogues,,, well, your writing skills are well-displayed here... magnificent job :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


jayanth

4 Months Ago

thank you abhishek. cheers :)
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If you hadn't pointed me this way the ending would have been a surprise.
Life can change in the blink of an eye, we should all make the most of every day

Posted 4 Months Ago


jayanth

4 Months Ago

ahh i'm sorry about that , hope you loved it.

i totally agree with you , you will nev.. read more
First thing to say, you wrote the story title 3 times and I guess one time would be enough

And I have a feeling that you could've continued writing about this, but anyway I liked it.

You're good with words tho, keep writing, my friend!

Posted 5 Months Ago


jayanth

5 Months Ago

Thankyou :) oh i would have wanted to write more , i wrote this for contest with less than 300 words.. read more
Rassoul

5 Months Ago

Waiting for more.

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