The Cap

Aquatic nature in all its drama

I am the breaker,

rolling like a stone, and roiling through life.

I collect very little.

Separate yet one,

with brothers in silent turmoil.

I conform with my surroundings, 

until energy overtakes me.

Then I pound, and reshape, 

all in my wake.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I like this very much. Our spirituous nature often captures this feeling. While temporarily broken, we will burst forth again. Great job!

I am really enjoying this newly risen "voice" of yours. I think it's always been your voice. It was just silenced for a while in the thunderstorm.

[Jay Steitler]

Amazing interpretation! I didn't even realize the transformative nature of the verses at the end of this, until I just re-read it. Must have come from my subconscious mind! Yep, the storm has settled, and you do indeed "get me". :) Thanks for an enlightening review!

[A. Amos]

This is powerful, deep and amazingly interesting....i enjoyed it!

[Sami Khalil]

The power of transformation and the power of your words...Bravo.......................

[Shaquana Adams]

Short but thought provoking with rich imagery. Good job!
-QuanaWana

[Sami Khalil]

Thought provoking. Excellent imagery...:)....................

[Jay Steitler]

Thank you, Friend

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).........................

[Amanda J Hopwood]

Very apt description of a wave hitting the land. :) It compares a person to a wave and I can really see the comparison

[Jay Steitler]

precisely! Some of us are stormy conformists or loners, who occasionally break out. Thank you for your feedback!