Vornado

Vornado

A Poem by Jay Steitler
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Created this one in minutes, after witnessing a squall. Words tripped off the tip of my brain, with relative ease this afternoon.

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Swirling, dancing, blustery vortex,

stripping the wood with your dizzying efficiency.

Cold wind, recind your violence,

giving me the allowance of peaceful travels.

I want not much; 

Just the benevolence of sunnier days.

© 2014 Jay Steitler



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Good observation and good description of this phenomenon...Bravo..................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jay Steitler

3 Years Ago

Thanks Sami! Had a front row seat to the excitement, from my kitchen table!
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)...................
Distinctively resentful of nature's violence, yet done tactfully with good form and excellent imagery.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jay Steitler

3 Years Ago

The imagery's the thing. Thanks for your review!

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Added on February 27, 2014
Last Updated on March 23, 2014
Tags: snow, squall, tornado, vortex, vornado, wind, chill, cold strip, wood, deck, ramp, bitter violent

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Jay Steitler
Jay Steitler

Penfield, NY



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A bit of a renaissance man, frequent white-lighter, and poet-scholar of life. Love art and photo. Play a little mandolin, and sing. I study karate, and play wheelchair rugby(Murderball). I've read Haw.. more..

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A Poem by Jay Steitler