ALONE

ALONE

A Poem by jeannemarie coulter
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of LOVE passing

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ALONE

"cold air
           shifting breeze
                      pale moon...
alone
          walking
                       because sleep eludes,
alone
          listening
                       to frogs        
singing                     
          in the soft
                        mist wet night...
they
          sing of
                         LIFE...
           of LOVE...
ALONE...
            because
                          YOU
have
            passed into
                           the next plane
i have
            lost my voice
                             to sing of
LIFE...
             of LOVE...
                              a whisper
soft
              as the shifting breeze
                              in tall grass,
brushes my heart...
               brushes my soul
                              I AM
here...
            as long as
                             YOU LIVE...
as long
            as your
                            SPIRIT
pulses
            on/in any plane...
                            I will be
with YOU...
             LOVE YOU...
                            we were,
are,
            will always
                          be...
our LOVE
            is eternal
                          dancing
 in the
            "star stuff"
                          of the universe
forever
            expanding,
                          opalescent,
ALIVE...

© 2015 jeannemarie coulter



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This is just beautiful. It has that sad feeling of losing a loved one but then has that slight confidence that you will someday see each other again. I think hope is one of the most beautiful things in this world, because it can make the impossible happen. I also like the format of this poem, it was fun to read and flowed very nicely. A great poem :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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jeannemarie coulter

2 Years Ago

thank you for understaanding and enjoying my offering



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Amazing use of words dear Poet. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


a poignant write with vivid imagery! well done! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely. I'm putting it in my library.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is just beautiful. It has that sad feeling of losing a loved one but then has that slight confidence that you will someday see each other again. I think hope is one of the most beautiful things in this world, because it can make the impossible happen. I also like the format of this poem, it was fun to read and flowed very nicely. A great poem :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

2 Years Ago

thank you for understaanding and enjoying my offering
A beautifully crafted and formatted piece of work. I think we all can relate to a time of when we have lost our voice

Posted 2 Years Ago


That was a lovely piece Jeannemarie. and the arrangement was original and made it enjoyable to read. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


oh this is so sad but beautiful. The passing of a loved one and how we hang on to their memories...

Our love is eternal dancing in the star stuff

Love that !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

2 Years Ago

thank you...our love was/is very deep and still with me in spite of cancer taking him in 97
This is a heart-rending and compassionate poem. The emptiness one feels after losing a loved one is something that gets to the core of our being and forces us to ask ourselves who we are. I believe they never leave. They are only magnified within us where they stay forever.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

2 Years Ago

he is with me always...we were blessed because our lust grew into deep love...wonderful...
You've created a passionate poem here in a uniquely worded format. Haunting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

2 Years Ago

thank you for the kind words
Knowing what it is like to lose the one you love, I can relate to your words.. Sad and beautiful.. you have touched my heart.

Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


jeannemarie coulter

2 Years Ago

thank you, he lives in my heartsoul even now

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