AMBER LIGHT ASCENDING

of alien love and more

AMBER LIGHT ASCENDING

in amber light ascending
he came to the well
silent,
drinking,
gazing into the water as i watched
from the balcony
in amber light ascending...

he saw me,
my flesh light brushed
golden beribboned
reflected in water
and
he carressed me
came up to me
riding sunlight up the wall
mounting the baLcony
mounting me
lighting me with love
and
i painted endless living fantasies
on his golden fur flesh
to bask
flower burst blooming
in liquid ambrosia light
from his eyes

together in the amber light ascending
we formed the eternal living pattern
beautiful, bountiful,
becoming
golden furred aliens
of our new world
who come to drink
from your well
in the amber light ascending...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Gentle tone and good story.
"he carressed me
came up to me
riding sunlight up the wall
mounting the baLcony
mounting me
lighting me with love"
You create good place and hopeful light. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you, just a little sci-fi fantasy from out on the rim...

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem and you are welcome.

[Amber Lily]

This had my name in it so of course I had to read it! It gave an overall nice warm feeling with all of the golden colors. Great job :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

my thanks abound

[sinNsincerity]

This read was so delicate and had such a pleasant flow.
Excellent write.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you for the kind words

[Perkele.7885]

I am not much enthralled by the whole gamut of the phantasy world. I can see how how a child might find everything about it wondrous to behold, but, unfortunately that excludes me. I am sure that your poetry is great as it is always, I just cannot get through it to the end. This is a wonderful combination of poem and picture!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

This feels like magic! Wonderful poem JC. You never disappoint.

[JayceeC]

This is beautiful as the fantasy but I can also see it as a metaphor or symbolic write. Being bathed in a golden glow of love, the lover comes to quenches thirst from the nectar. I could go on but I don't want this to sound too risqué when you're poem was not. Love visuals as always.

[dan]

jeannemarie, I have to admit that I can't figure out what the "golden furred" creature is (man, beast or otherworldly) but it strikes me as having a fantastical bent to it, dreamlike and just short of disturbing. The writing, as is your wont, is very strong and filled with lively imagery...that almost goes without saying for your writes. I hope my review justified my feelings correctly about this, if not I apologize for my lack of clarity. Brilliant writing! take care...dan

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gorgeous piece of fantasy love...it's out of this world, Jeannemarie, right down to the chosen picture and font colour to match... just beautiful

[Emily]

I love the wording and meaning!
Keep up the great work!!

[Tania]

Extremely creative... Enjoyed reading this :)