MY LOVER

MY LOVER
with water ease
dripping from trees
savoring the earth
beneath a velvet washed
cranberry sky
i walk
with wind laced hair
on balconies brushed
and magenta beribboned,
reaching to remember
the man who lingered
spontaneously until dawn...

from moss draped shadows
he comes softly alive
glowing delicately crimson/gold
caressing to survive
my fantasia designs
finger painted on his flesh
while he danced
in burgandy flames,
pausing only an instant
to drink this emerald body
before stirring wind softly onward
into his ruby dawn...

© 2015 jeannemarie coulter

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Coyote Poetry

Amazing use of words dear friend. I had to read twice. Your description create color and good place and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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Posted 8 Years Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

"the man who lingered/ spontaneously until dawn"

what a moment captured with those lines...colorful poem of love and attraction...

i like the length of lines and how it gives the poem a certain look that fits well with theme...

time doesn't exist when we are that much in love...and this has that hour glass look...