A Return To Form (In Progress)

So it's been a long time since I have written something new and original and that's lame! So I finally got some creativity flowing and this is the start of me writing again!

Author's Note

I know it isn't much but I like what I have and am open to hearing your thoughts and opinions of course! Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Anjali]

First of all, Thank you Joshua for the read request. The presentation of your writing is simply awesome and very unique. I like the way you have introduced about your writing and like the flow of the rhyme. I felt a fun factor while reading after a long time.

Waiting to read more from you since the title says (In Progress)!

Keep on writing more.

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you! I am happy you liked the presentation, I was trying something a little different with this. I need to work on it more!

[Adam Adams]

quite an interesting and very rhythmic work you've come up with. the flow of your fluent thoughts's amazing along with the depth of your story-write. nicely penned.

[Joshua McNay]

I didn't think I had depth but glad to know someone thinks I do! Thank you.

[Skib]

I loved the nursery rhyme feel to this piece :) I look forward to seeing how this progresses :) well done man .

[Joshua McNay]

Why thank you! I didn't realize it had a nursery rhyme feel but I am totally ok with it!

[Stan Lee]

I want to hear the story of how a red fox regained his glory! Looking forward to seeing more from you. I always enjoy your rhymes. :)

[Joshua McNay]

Thanks! Yeah I need to get on it and tell more of the story.

[iamshadowine]

I really like this poem! it's fun to read and great indeed!
keep writing :D

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you! I look forward to adding more to it.

[HeyJadeXO]

This has a very fun feel to it so far.Great job.

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you!