Goodbye

Saying goodbye, to her and to my normal rhyming. Let's try this whole free verse style shall we.

Author's Note

Trying something different. I normally rhyme so much it hurts me, so I tried my hand at a free verse poem. Let me know what you think! I would love your thoughts and opinions on my first sort of attempt. As always thank you for reading!

Reviews

[emipoemi]

so sad....yet so good. Well done!!

[heartspeaks]

Another fabulous work of yours.... Wonderful.... Its a story in its own. Touched

[Tony Jordan]

This is that which is needed when we are needing to read such as this. Bravo

[Najam Us Saher]

Reading something when you are going through that time is something very heart touching. And this is that. I loved each and every word of it. Thank you for writing this.

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you. I am glad to hear that you liked it so much. Means a lot to me. Thank you again!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome ☺

[Surya]

No words except to say I loved it...
I loved the way you conveyed..:)

[Joshua McNay]

I will say I enjoy the words you chose! Thank you for the review and I am happy you liked it.

[Anjali]

wow..... its so beautiful.
i really liked the idea and the theme of the poem. such an amazing way to say goodbye.
'because we were right just at the wrong time'
these are my favourite lines! keep it up!

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you I am glad you liked it. not going to lie I enjoyed those lines too! Thanks again!