Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Joshua McNay
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Saying goodbye, to her and to my normal rhyming. Let's try this whole free verse style shall we.

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© 2017 Joshua McNay


Author's Note

Joshua McNay
Trying something different. I normally rhyme so much it hurts me, so I tried my hand at a free verse poem. Let me know what you think! I would love your thoughts and opinions on my first sort of attempt. As always thank you for reading!

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so sad....yet so good. Well done!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Another fabulous work of yours.... Wonderful.... Its a story in its own. Touched

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is that which is needed when we are needing to read such as this. Bravo

Posted 2 Years Ago


Reading something when you are going through that time is something very heart touching. And this is that. I loved each and every word of it. Thank you for writing this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua McNay

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I am glad to hear that you liked it so much. Means a lot to me. Thank you again!
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome ☺
No words except to say I loved it...
I loved the way you conveyed..:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua McNay

2 Years Ago

I will say I enjoy the words you chose! Thank you for the review and I am happy you liked it.
wow..... its so beautiful.
i really liked the idea and the theme of the poem. such an amazing way to say goodbye.
'because we were right just at the wrong time'
these are my favourite lines! keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua McNay

2 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad you liked it. not going to lie I enjoyed those lines too! Thanks again!

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Added on April 27, 2017
Last Updated on April 27, 2017
Tags: moon, goodbye, relationships, feelings, let go

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Joshua McNay
Joshua McNay

Grand Junction, CO



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