Good vs Evil

A play with words

 

A cold, calculated, craved condition

An emotional erosion, estranged edition

Floating, flying then feverishly falling

Crashing, cramping and curling up crying

Never knowing names but frantically finding fame

Absolute, alternative answers next to nearly nothing

Sheltered, sharpened, shivering, shutout and shot

Diligently dying and deservingly done

 

Surviving, sacrificing, sustaining, savoring

Relevant, resistant, resplendent and radiant

Hoping, healing with head held high

Loving, laughing and learning through life

Willingly, wittingly, why wonder why

Waiting and wanting the will to grow wise

Persistence, perseverance, patience, a prize

Standing, studying, sturdy and styled

Inspired, invigorated and interested in life

Talented, together, brilliant, brave and bright

 

At every emulated angle in life, you will experience both good and evil, both friend and enemy.  Take each turn as an opportunity of overall opulence in that of mankind and you will find riches beyond all means.

Author's Note

a play with words

Good vs Evil

Reviews

[Myenigma]

holy s**t,the alliteration is awesome. their must have been some effort into this. good advice too
I like it all but
this verse grabbed my attention
"Loving, laughing and learning through life
Willingly, wittingly, why wonder why
Waiting and wanting the will to grow wise"

I also like
"Floating, flying then feverishly falling
Crashing, cramping and curling up crying
Never knowing names but frantically finding fame
Absolute, alternative answers next to nearly nothing"

[jdr / Jennifer]

Thank you- I love this review. And yes- there was effort, but I knew what I wanted to do. It took me some time, but I had fun with it. Thanks again.

[Sheila Kline]

Wisdom we should each take to heart and remember! Yes, we shall each experience good and evil and it is how we perceive the impact of each that determines our fate!
Well done!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, words to live by...and great alliteration with which to hear the words.

jacob